Story+telling+with+graphics

=Story telling with graphics= post your pictures (under your name). Add a title  Briefly write your comments (those you wrote in your notepads in the previous lessons) bellow each picture

=Robert Marra= =I like that you used something that had meaning to you, and while the arrows help to tie the pictures into the main point, it is hard to follow and figure out where the story starts and ends.-Jessica Pardee I like how your work flows. The composistion is really nice. However, I wish that the quote was a little easier to read. -Jessie I really like how you didnt waste any space and made it just one large picture. - Jesse It was a good idea to make all of the arrows go back to the center, relating to art, but I wish there was more of your own words. -Kristen Edwards I think it is a cool picture, but there isn't much here for a story. - Matt

= =Jessica Pardee=

sing the flower's colors' as symbolism was a good idea and ties in a theme. To be more interesting I think that there should be less negative space.- Jessie Flowers are always pleasent and you were able to tell a story with them. Kudos. - Jesse This is a continuous, easy to read story, but more animations in the pictures could make it more exciting also. -Kristen Edwards This is a well organized story, just use the space better. -Matt Your pictures are bright and are well taken. The contrast between the colors of the flowers and the personality of the "woman" in the story is neat. There is a lot of white left on the page and I feel that by using larger pictures and lettering font, you could take away a lot of the white background. - Rob Marra

=Jessie Szakacs= I believe this picture/story is giving a message of limits in life. This says a lot without using a lot of words, but it could be more explanatory. - Kristen Edwards You have good use of space and the faded out sign over the pictures adds even more meaning to the story. The message is slightly confusing. -Jessica Pardee I love this. Im not sure what youre trying to convey but its awesome. - Jesse I don't know what this is about. its interesting but try to organize it a bit better and add some detial to the story The pictures take up a lot of the page and result in a very interesting concept. The concept itself is quite deep and may be confusing to some people. I had to read the bold, red words a few times before I thought I was reading them the right way. You may want to put some arrows specifying how to read them. - Rob Marra

=Matthew Wagner=

It was interesting how you wrote your story like a fairytale. Your boxes are very colorful and may overpower your pictures. -Jessie More graphics or the shape of the pictures could make the story more interesting to look at. -Kristen Edwards I really enjoyed your story, but the text and colorful boxes may outshine the graphics a bit too much. -Jessica Pardee Great pictures and good story. The bright colored backgrounds seem to take away from the pictures and the story though. - Rob Marra =Your animated story on the slides was very entertaining. Looking at it without the visual animations is still easy to follow but it doesn't have the same effect. -Jessica This was very funny and entertaining. It's very creative and was edited well. -Jessie It was fun to see something other than a word document. Very creative. It could be confusing for children to follow, though, depending on the age group. -Kristen Edwards This was definately my favorite. your animation was awesome - Matt Wagner Watching your animated slide was very enjoyable. I felt that some of the animations seemed to take away from the point of the concept though. - Rob Marra

= =Kristen Edwards= ==

I like that you work is autibiographical. This makes it very observant and genuine. - Jessie I like all of the angles you used in your pictures. It makes it very easy to look at and your idea is very creative. - Jesse The angles used in your pictures are very interesting and add a nice touch, but the story is slightly hard to follow. If it was all on the same page, it may have flowed better. -Jessica Pardee Great, bright pictures. Interesting story. There is a lot of white still left on the page that could have been eliminated by enlarging the photos and text. - Rob Marra